SHOT LIST & STORYBOARD AUDIENCE FEEDBACK

We interviewed the same pair to get feedback on our final narrative that was derived through the shot-list and clarifying the storyline shot-by-shot. We asked them what they thought of the completed narrative and also what they thought of the storyboard animatic.

They thought;

"I love the completed narrative, it makes a lot more sense, the motifs we talked about are clearer and it  will let the audience, umm, feel more towards the child rather than confused I think"

"The drawings and use of the story video [animatic] are great, it makes it clear, if you stick to that I'm sure the film will turn out great"

"When you're filming make sure you stick to that storyboard, it looks really clear, and they're only stick characters!"

"The shot list is good, all the columns with the different things should make the filming pretty easy for you. The new narrative as well is pretty good, it makes more sense and is clearer"

From this we are far more pleased with our final choice of narrative and motifs, they felt that we had taken on their advice and got a clearer vision. We now want to confront the filming day itself and how we go about scheduling that day and working out the equipment we need.