script

For the street shot I need a script that involves the young boy telling the man on the street that there has been a murder, he is delivering the message and so at the end the man pays him for his troubles. Recording sound can be difficult to do to a high quality so I want to keep the script short.


(young boy walks into frame and up to man without standing too close)

YOUNG BOY: a message from a Mr Banks sir

(man turns to look at the boy)

YOUNG BOY: he says that a innocent girl has been killed, in the wood sir

(steps closer)

MAN: go on

YOUNG BOY: well he just thought you should know. He mentioned something about a man too, he said you'd know who, said it was him and he was dangerous

MAN: alright then (gives him coins) get out of here

(boy runs off)


The scene continues on from this but there is no more speech.
The script is very simple but may adapt as I am filming depending on what sound right or wrong at the time. I will also film some extra parts of this scene so that I can pick and choose what to use when it comes to editing.